The reason I didn't finish this one isn't a reflection on the book, it's just that I couldn't renew it. In truth, I found a lot of the writing to be lackluster, but it's made up for it by the inspiring stories and the art. I also realize that's it's hard to tell a coherent story of a whole social movement in 23 pages (and actually fewer, because of the art). Of course you're going to have to cut and condense.